PERFORMANCE MARKETING / STARTER PACKAGE
Find potential friction between the first impression and an enquiry.
Required inputs: 1 landing page URL, audience and intended conversion.
Qualitative review without analytics analysis, user testing, redesign or implementation. One offer, one target market and one language. One consolidated feedback round within the brief is included.
FROM BRIEF TO DELIVERY
Describe your offer, audience, market and language. Add the inputs listed above when available.
We clarify questions in writing. A call is optional. We then confirm scope and start.
Delivery after the complete brief and confirmed start: 48 hours. You receive the files and recommendations listed above.
One consolidated feedback round within the original brief is included. Submit feedback within seven calendar days of delivery.
EASY ENQUIRY / NO REQUIRED CALL
Landingpage Quick Check · €79 · 48 hours
Your name, email and a short description are enough for the initial enquiry. We clarify questions in writing. A video call is available if you want one.
Only if you want: talk first ↗SAMPLE DELIVERY / ACMECLOUD
Five clear recommendations for a better demo page
Fully worked example for a fictional company. Not client work.
Fictional brief: AcmeCloud manages software licences, owners and review dates. Audience: growing IT teams. Page goal: a relevant demo enquiry. The starting page below was constructed for this sample; no live data was collected.
Starting copy of the sample page
We support businesses with a modern platform.
CTA: Learn more1 / High
Observation: The headline mentions neither software licences nor the intended role.
Why it matters: Visitors first have to work out whether the page addresses their task.
Recommendation: Replace the headline with “Your software licences. One clear overview.” Name licence inventory, owners and review dates in the subheading.
2 / High
Observation: The button says “Learn more” but opens the demo form.
Why it matters: The expected action and click destination do not match.
Recommendation: Label the button “Request a demo”. Explain beside it: “We review your use case and the right next demo.”
3 / Medium
Observation: The sample page requires nine fields, including budget and full postal address.
Why it matters: Those inputs are not justified for the initial scheduling step.
Recommendation: Start with name, business email and a short use-case description. Handle further qualification in the conversation.
4 / Medium
Observation: The sample page only shows abstract shapes, not an explanatory view of licence inventory.
Why it matters: The promised overview remains difficult to picture.
Recommendation: Add an approved product view with a short explanation. Clearly label demo data and remove personal information.
5 / Medium
Observation: In the constructed mobile layout, three feature sections precede the first demo link.
Why it matters: The next step only becomes visible after extended scrolling.
Recommendation: Place a demo CTA immediately after the value proposition and subheading. Check form and keyboard use on small screens.
Update the headline and CTA first, then the form and product view. Evaluate impact using actual qualified demo enquiries received. This sample contains no conversion data or promised uplift.
Review 1 landing page: value proposition, CTA and form Qualitative assessment of desktop and mobile views 5 prioritised improvements in a compact PDF report
1 landing page URL, audience and intended conversion. Also specify the preferred language and target market so I can confirm the scope.
After the complete brief and written confirmation of scope and start. The agreed delivery time is 48 hours. A video call is optional.
One consolidated feedback round within the original brief is included when submitted within seven calendar days of delivery. Additional scope is agreed separately upfront.
Samples are illustrative excerpts for a fictional company. They show the format, while your delivery is adapted to your offer. Project references describe separate earlier engagements.
